More lyric silliness

[zdashamber]

You've got a lot of nerve
to say you are my friend
When I was down, you just stood there wincing

You've got a lot of nerve
To say you've got a helping hand to lend
You just want to be on the side that's mincing

Ah, Dylan. His tunes can be annoying, but his lyrics have a richness...

Comments

[rikibeth.livejournal.com]

Meh? Those aren't the lyrics I know... what made you change them?

I've been writing a scene that has that for a soundtrack all day. Or, avoiding writing it.

[zdashamber.livejournal.com]

Well... I was, to some degree, being silly. I mean, rhyming "wince" with "mince"... Kind of silly.

A Snapely scene?

[rikibeth.livejournal.com]

Well, what else, after all?

Naturally, with a depressing soundtrack like that, it's not an easy one to write.

[zdashamber.livejournal.com]

Well... I dunno if it's helpful to hear it, but I'm interested in seeing your fic. Though of course this bit sounds (above all others) private.

I've not been in a situation of writing hard stuff where I knew how it all came out... Wish I could offer advice.

[rikibeth.livejournal.com]

Oh, it's not private. It's just not ready to post yet.

The sooner I quit dragging my feet, the sooner it'll go up.

And I'll check to make sure you're on the fic filter.

[zdashamber.livejournal.com]

And then, to the other degree... That is Aisling, singing to Brennan. The rest of the song doesn't really need much adapting.

Anyway. Did you write the scene?