Most of this, I'm pretty calm about, though some of it seems like a bit of a stretch. The most "stretched" bit, to me, is this:

"Keep an eye out to see that you're mentioning women game designers and theorists when you can."

Why? Either they will be mentioned naturally in the context of the discussion, or they won't. If they will be, great, whatever. If they won't, isn't going out of the way to do so just a little bit patronizing?